WHEN CAN WE COLLAB .______.
Great song, as always!
Lol I'd love to collab, but right now I've got quite a few projects. Sometime in the future perhaps?
Thanks for the support! :D
whoa, what happened at :36 seconds? Work on that build up some more.
The rest is okay.
The chorus could use some polishing, though.
It brings tears to my eyes T_T
Finally, it's great to hear some good dubstep here on NG.
Usually it's just kids with 3xOsc in FL Studio -_-
And you've brought a great big smile to my face! Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoy it. Haha, well we all start somewhere, don't we? :p
Where to start.
Well, to begin with, you have no bass, you have no melody. All it is, is you throwing a sample down and...that's it.
You didn't even attempt to cut the sample by its self so it doesn't overlap.
You seem like you're 10 so I'll just recommend you look for better drum samples and use them to your advantage. The FL Studio standard kicks, snares, claps, and hats just don't cut it. At all. For any type of production.
You need to learn something about chords and key relations before you even think about opening up the piano roll. None of your "notes" make any type of sense and it's just painful to listen to.
Take the time, learn about music production and come back.
Please, for the sake of humanity.
It needs a harder drop if you're gonna put wobbles like that in.
Speaking of the wobbles, they're good! Nice variations in there!
I also do like the NES synths you put in there.
Overall, good. Just need to have a harder drop.
Sounds great! Such a classic song and was my favorite too when I was young (I played the original on Nintendo 64)!
I recommend a TEENEY TINY bit of mastering. The ocarina sounds a bit over powering and doesn't blend well with the rest of the track!
But other than that, a excellent remake!
Keep up the good work!
so it's True! I thought it was just me or my volume :P (the loud ocarina) ok, I will update it soon! thanks for your review! :)
lol, I like your icon!
Shit's fucking HEAVY.
=D i know right?
it's a good start!
If I can suggest a couple of things:
- If you're going to start with a synth, make it a bit shorter than it is
- Make your punch louder and add more reverse bass!!
Other than that, it's pretty good! Nice job!
Oh ok, yeah that sounds do-able, ill try it out. Thanks for reviewing, man.
You can rap so good!
I'm jealous :(
Haha thanks man.
It's a good song and the melody is nice but a suggestion would be to lower the volume of the kick drum.
It sounds too loud D:
Other than that, try to master the volume a bit and you're solid!
Keep up the good work :3
hey, thanks man, ive been waiting orn some crit on this song.
Means a lot coming from you=]
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